Journalism posts: a summary
Here’s a summary of some of the practical journalism posts I’ve written this year.
Multimedia journalism
Great free apps for multimedia journalists :: the most popular one by far, covering some online sites to aid journo production
Shooting multimedia-a lot to juggle :: the challenges of covering stories in multimedia in the field; in this case, Iraq.
Video Journalism
The ultimate budget film making kit :: a guide to how I kitted myself out for video journalism on a £500 budget
Broadcast Journalism
The radio emergency survival guide :: how radio newsrooms should prepare for major news events
Making the most of your network :: a good example of how to use other journalists in your group
Three ways to instantly improve your newswriting :: a quick guide to broadcast writing
Five even quicker ways to improve your newswriting :: more tips
Covering court cases-the questions you were afraid to ask :: everything from what to wear in court, and where to sit
How to avoid being THAT annoying PR person :: advice for those unfortunate PR professionals
9 questions for newsreaders :: a checklist for newsreaders
5 even quicker ways to improve your newswriting
Not long ago I put down Three Ways to Instantly Improve your Newswriting.
It’s occured to me since, there are even more – even quicker – ways to instantly make your copy shine just that bit more.
Note: these ones are more for broadcasters, who write to be heard not read.
01. Get rid of “that”
Once you’ve written some copy, go through it and remove the word “that” and see what a difference it makes. For example:
“The International Monetary Fund has said that Britain will be hit hardest by the economic downturn.
It has predicted that the economy will shrink by over 2.8 percent in the next year.
Meanwhile the Institute for Fiscal Studies claims that the British government will be saddled with debt for the next 20 years.”
OK, so remove the “that”s and we’re left with something which slips off the tongue far more easily:
“The International Monetary Fund has said Britain will be hit hardest by the economic downturn.
It has predicted the economy will shrink by over 2.8 percent in the next year.
Meanwhile the Institute for Fiscal Studies claims the British government will be saddled with debt for the next 20 years.”
02. Contract words
This one is simple and should become automatic for broadcast writers. Contract everything where possible:
He is –> He’s
She will –> She’ll etc.
So our recession copy above can be improved further:
“The International Monetary Fund’s said Britain will be hit hardest by the economic downturn.
It’s predicted the economy will shrink by over 2.8 percent in the next year.
Meanwhile the Institute for Fiscal Studies claims the British government’ll be saddled with debt for the next 20 years.”
The only possible exception is ‘will’. It’s not so easy to contract that down – although I’ve done it after “government” in the example above.
03. Knock it all into the present tense
Especially the top line. News is about what’s happening now. If you can’t put your topline into the present tense, you need to find a new angle on the story. If you can’t do that, it’s time to can the story.
“The International Monetary Fund says Britain will be hit hardest by the economic downturn.
It’s predicting the economy will shrink by over 2.8 percent in the next year.
Meanwhile the Institute for Fiscal Studies claims the British government’ll be saddled with debt for the next 20 years.”
04. A new top line
Let’s be honest, this copy is pretty boring. More bad news about the economy. Instantly sharpen it up by sticking in a new top line – something short pacy, which sums up the whole story.
“Another headache for Gordon Brown tonight…
The International Monetary Fund says Britain will be hit hardest by the economic downturn.
It’s predicting the economy will shrink by over 2.8 percent in the next year.
Meanwhile the Institute for Fiscal Studies claims the British government’ll be saddled with debt for the next 20 years.”
05. Over is out
This is the one thing that turns me into a grammar nazi: the difference between “over” and “more than”.
When you’re talking about numbers, figures, statistics, you use more than. You can’t go over a number. You go over a hill.
So it’s “…the economy will shrink by more than 2.8 percent in the next year.”
Five quick steps and we’ve knocked that boring bit of econo-copy into shape. On top of that, I’d get rid of the long organisation names and replace a few ‘says’/’claims’ with ‘reckons’. But you get the point.
Any other tips you’ve picked up? Stick ’em in the comments box!
How to avoid being “that annoying PR person”
The phone rings – London number.
“Newsdesk, Adam speaking.”
[Excitedly] “Hello Adam, it’s Christabelle here calling from Markettowers PR*, how are you?”
Markettowers. Bollocks.
[Tersely] “I’m OK thanks.”
“Great, that’s great. Hey look, I’ve got a great story which I think you’ll really like – with some great local stats.”
“…go on”
“Well we’ve done some research into when people fill in their tax returns, and discovered that 18% of people in your area leave it until the last day.”
“Right.”
“And we’ve got David Nobody from Tesco.com available for interview tomorrow morning to talk about why we should get them in sooner – can I book you in for a slot?”
“Send a press release and we’ll take a look delete it immediately.”
And so another London PR agency calls with another lame story. It’s one of the minor annoyances of local journalism, albeit a neccessary one, as once in every 15 calls, they bring you a story with some tickle factor that you know will make a light mid-bulletin filler.
It wasn’t until I saw a job ad in the Guardian that I realised what the game really was: it advertised a position at a marketing agency – and the job was to “sell” (their word) stories to radio stations.
Essentially it’s a glorified call centre job. And when I also spotted they get paid £10k more than me, my patience for PR hacks fell through the floor.
So if you work in PR, if – heaven forbid – it is your job to ‘sell’ stories to busy journalists, please read the following advice – it might stop your press release entering the recycle bin.
Don’t call anywhere near the top of the hour
Radio journalists in particular read the news at the top of every hour. Calling anytime after 00:40 will most likely result in a brisk “sod off”. It’s different for newspaper and TV journos of course.
Pitch in 10 seconds or less
It’s a skill journalists are trained to do, so you should too. If you can’t explain your story in less than 10 seconds, don’t bother.
Do your research
I have actually had calls offering me “great local stats” for the wrong county. The phone was hung up pretty soon after. Also, for many local media, regional stats are not local stats.
Do your research
I’ve had calls offering stories about where to invest your money-when most of my target audience shop at Iceland. Sell it to Classic FM, not me.
Do your research
Local commercial radio does bulletins of no longer than 3 minutes. They never do longer interviews unless its with someone off X-Factor. So don’t pitch long 2 ways. Journalists need short clips.
Don’t keep calling
Newdesks fully realise the more times you call, the more desperate you are, ergo the fewer other outlets have used your story, ergo your story blows. Call to pitch, and don’t call back. If a journalist likes the story they’ll make the call – we’re quite clever, you know.
And know your client will very rarely get a name check
You may pitch them as ‘David Nobody from Tesco.com” but 9 times out of 10 they’ll be referenced on air as ‘Money expert David Nobody”. We’re not interested that it’s Tesco, sorry.
*not a real company
9 questions for newsreaders
Aaah, reading the news. Some people wait years to get to do it. Some people have to fight, and beg, and slog it out to get a chance.
And if you work in radio – particularly local radio – you could find yourself behind the mic weeks out of college.
Many big media groups offer on the job training and voice coaching. But what else must the newsreader know?

Image: Adam Westbrook
Here are 9 questions for a newsreader to ask themselves after every bulletin:
01. it legally sound and accurate?
Possibly the most important one. Have you remembered your ‘allegedlys’ your ‘he denies the charges’ and your Section 39?
02. Did you treat stories in a responsible way?
Sometimes it’s easy to exaggerate the stories, especially if you’re trying to make it a lead, or even in the pursuit of creativity.
03. Were they appropriate for a family audience?
Dogs die in hot cars, and kids cry in hot cars when the radio’s talking about graphic violence and sex.
04. Would the listener trust you? Have you left any questions unanswered?
It’s vital you are straight with your listener. Keep your scripts simple, and for the love of God, don’t include phrases, terms or explanations when even you don’t know what they mean. This is even more important during the recession. When you tell your audience a local company has gone into receivership, what does that mean? Getting it wrong, or skimming over it doesn’t help anyone understand these difficult times.
05. Have you been creative, but not confusing?
Being creative with your audio and your writing is what makes you stand out in a competitive market. That’s split clips (sometimes called turbos), creative voxes, asking questions, even being poetic. But don’t confuse your listener or distort the story in the pursuit of creativity.
06. Did you involve the listener?
Radio was creating virtual communties long before social networking. How can you involve your listener? Can they text or email their thoughts? Do you have an answerphone line they can call? A montage of listener calls on the hot topic of the day is always a winner.
07. Did you help increase web traffic?
Use every opportunity to throw listeners to your website. But be wary of reading out a web address after every story. The website is very useful if there’s an important story, like the Middle East, which is just too dry. Give it two lines, and then tell your listener to go online if they want more.
08. Did you speak directly to your listener?
That means phrases like “as we told you earlier” “you might remember we told you about” “you’ve been getting in touch with us about…”. The old adage of radio remains: you’re talking to a single listener not a million. It is a personal medium. Talk to them, not at them.
09. Did the stories you chose reflect what your listeners are talking about?
It’s difficult to know what the talking point is when you’re stuck on a newdesk. Use your reporters. Watch the news channels. But don’t be pressured into a lead, just because your rivals are.
Taken from a selection of questions Bauer Radio journalists are often asked to ask themselves.
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